Friday, May 1, 2009

Lifesaver

Wait... what? Mr McLau- Charlie, if I may: sometimes it helps to give just a little more information in your query. Your reader, then will be left saying "I want to hear more!" instead of "Wait... what?" Just some constructive criticism.

"An arrogant businessman takes a nightmarish, life changing trip to a wacky island full of the bizarre and macabre where anything can and probably will happen in this offbeat supernatural comedy simply because he failed to read the brochure..."

Genre: Comedy

Roger Mills is sent on an urgent business trip to save his job, company and upcoming wedding. However, Roger is struck on the head by a strange bolt of blue lightning that has a life altering effect on him. First to go his is luck; it goes from incredible to no luck at all. He has a hell of a time reaching the island and once there if he thought his troubles were over; he had better think again as he is arrested and charged with the ancient law of Lifesaving.

Charlie McLaughlin
charlie.mclaughlin@hotmail.com

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