2 from andrew

These puppies were submitted to Cory through craigslist. Looks to me like this guy wrote a script, and then a script about writing that script- though I assume it is mostly fictional. Lord.

Journey To The Green Monster is about two teen going Cross Country from California to Boston. They are running from their troubled pasts. Soon they will be running from the mob and the FBI.

After eleven years, Vinnie's father, a famous mob boss, is getting out of jail. When Vinnie was a child he saw his father cutting up a body in the basement. He hasn't spoken to him since. He never told anyone
Joel's mother died when he was young. His father abused him, mentally and physically for most of his life.
Before graduation, both boys head towards Boston to catch a redsox game and for Joel to see the house where his mother grew up. Little known to Vinnie Joel killed his father before he left.
After finding out the money they were suppose to survive on was spent, and knowing he can't go back, Joel pulls out a gun and robs a convenient store. This sends the boys on a thrilling crash course with the FBI and Mob as they streak across the country towards Boston.

IN GOD'S TIME

After losing her husband a courageous woman, Mary Beth Andrews, will risk it all by taking her husbands lost dream across the country to Los Angeles.
After twenty years of marriage, Eben, Mary Beth's Husband, confesses to Mary Beth that he wants to desert his successful business and good friends in Boston to try out his passion, screen writing In Los Angeles. He had just finished his first script, Journey To The Green Monster, and felt it was what he had to do. Mary Beth argued the idea to her last breath. A heated argument followed. Ultimately ending when Mary Beth informed Eben she is pregnant.
Eben being the man he is, buries his passion for writing and stays in Boston. A few days later Eben dies.
A few months later we find Mary Beth alone at her cottage in the middle of the Cape Cod. In the height of winter, Mary Beth soaks in her misery. Through the darkness comes a package for her late husband.
This package will ultimately send Mary Beth on the craziest journey of her life. She heads cross country to get Eben's script sold or made for him. In her journeys she meets Jasmine and Joshua who will help her deal with the harsh realities of Hollywood, and help her learn to trust love again.

Let me know if you like the ideas. I'm getting some interest for Journey but now it looks shaky. Both are strong stories with endless possibilities. If not, I wish you the best of luck.

Andrew

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