Showing posts with label adventure. Show all posts
Showing posts with label adventure. Show all posts

Friday, May 22, 2009

Draconian Fire Of Light

As far as the author's promise that "Draconian Fire Of Light has mainstream appeal and commercially viable" I can't see any flaw in that statement given the following information:(posted by Alissa)


Screenplay Draconian Fire Of Light.

"A great story is about to unfold.
A journey of awe, wonder, amazement, fellowship and adventure is ready.
Destiny begins now."


I am seeking your financial support and expertise in producing Draconian Fire Of Light.


Genre Action / Adventure.


Joseph cares deeply for his grandma who is very ill.

Joseph joins Draconian a dragon to get help for her in the Mountain Of Mysteries.

Pirates and other amazing allies will join them on this great journey.

Tryseeion and Razor (both dragons) hate Draconian and his supporters.

They want to destroy them at all costs!


A powerful, unique, action adventure screenplay with loveable characters.
Draconian Fire Of Light has mainstream appeal and commercially viable.


Thank you.

Jonathan Friis
success@kol.co.nz

Friday, May 1, 2009

Lifesaver

Wait... what? Mr McLau- Charlie, if I may: sometimes it helps to give just a little more information in your query. Your reader, then will be left saying "I want to hear more!" instead of "Wait... what?" Just some constructive criticism.

"An arrogant businessman takes a nightmarish, life changing trip to a wacky island full of the bizarre and macabre where anything can and probably will happen in this offbeat supernatural comedy simply because he failed to read the brochure..."

Genre: Comedy

Roger Mills is sent on an urgent business trip to save his job, company and upcoming wedding. However, Roger is struck on the head by a strange bolt of blue lightning that has a life altering effect on him. First to go his is luck; it goes from incredible to no luck at all. He has a hell of a time reaching the island and once there if he thought his troubles were over; he had better think again as he is arrested and charged with the ancient law of Lifesaving.

Charlie McLaughlin
charlie.mclaughlin@hotmail.com

Wednesday, April 22, 2009

X Marks the Spot

This is from a 2 person writing team from Australia, and honestly I think describing the plot of any/every pirate movie ever made is not exactly the best way to pitch this. Just a constructive criticism.

"X Marks the Spot" is an action/adventure pirate comedy film which follows the bumbling Pirate Des and his inept crew as they attempt to bury the two Great Pirate Treasures that they have just stolen from the notorious Captain Good. Can Pirate Des outrun Captain Good? And who is the mysterious stowaway Sally and why is she so desperate to recover her Sterling Silver Serving Tray and Sterling Silver Goblets...?

If you would like to request a copy of our screenplay/synopsis, please feel free to contact us on the details provided above. We would like to thank you in advance for your time.
email: integrity@ultimate9.com.au